Academic Autobiography
Throughout the years of going to
school and developing academically, no one was there to support me compare to
my parents. Starting from my elementary years, I wasn’t always a good student. I
was immature and I caused many troubles which made my parents worry. I didn’t
really take my education seriously during my life. In elementary, I was
probably one of the biggest troublemakers in school. Elementary doesn’t matter,
but it’s where you learn the foundation of education. Adding, subtracting,
multiplying, dividing, and even spelling, you learn all this in elementary. But
I honestly didn’t care which made my mother upset. I used to upset her all the
time bringing terrible grades, but my mom never gave up on me.
She continuously taught me and
chastised me to become a better person. After I graduated elementary, I decided
to try for once. That’s when I realized that in order for you to accomplish
something, there needs to be a goal. If there’s no goal, there are no
achievements. From then on my grades started to develop. I realized that my
grades weren’t really the problem, because if tired, my grades wouldn’t have
been a problem. I then started to make goals for myself. They weren’t big goals
but every time I accomplished something, I made a bigger goal. Right now, my
biggest goal is to go to UC Berkeley and become a prosecuting lawyer. Obviously,
if I look at myself, it seems impossible, but my mother showed me that it wasn’t
impossible. She was always there for me even if I had good or bad grades. This
shows the heart of my mom. She had hope for something that didn’t seem
possible, but currently I am still in high school achieving little goals I made
for myself. This is beneficial and helps me grow to become a better person.
In the future, I hope to grow
academically so that I can also study and make achieve the little goals, I make
in college. If I make it to UC Berkeley, I would thank my mom first because she
is the one that helped me build a stable foundation to success.
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